In the text “A Letter to my Son”, the African-American
author Ta-Nehisi Coates writes about the issue of racism and the life of
African-Americans. In a letter dedicated to his son which was published in July
2015 in The Atlantic, Coates presents
his experiences as being a person with a ‘black body’ living in America, describes
the cruelty that black people encounter throughout their lifetime, and tries to
raise his son’s awareness of the hatred with which African-Americans were/are
confronted.
In particular, Coates speaks in his letter
about the fear that “ruled everything around me, and I knew, as all black
people do, that this fear was connected to the world out there”. Above all,
violence, criminality, and humiliation stoked this fear. Since many people
misleadingly thought and probably still think that people having black skin are
inferior to ‘white people’, African-Americans were oppressed in American
society and were even treated as slaves for a long time, as Coates states: “We
were black, beyond the visible spectrum, beyond civilization. Our history was
inferior because we were inferior, which is to say our bodies were inferior.
And our inferior bodies could not possibly be accorded to the same respect as
those that built the West.”
This racist treatment evoked widespread
discussion all around the world and even the concept of ‘race’ as well as the
description of African-Americans as being ‘black people’ caused sufficient
criticism in recent years. Coates even accuses the ‘white people’ by saying:
“They made us into a race. We made ourselves into a people.” Accordingly, one
might argue that the concept of ‘race’ leads to racism, racism to hate, hate to
ethnic discrimination and war. Thus, there seems to be a necessity that humans
should change their attitude as regards to other people having a different
ethnic background like African-Americans. Consequently, I am convinced that it
is essentially important for contemporary’s societies to prohibit and destroy
the idea that some people are inferior to others because of their skin colour
or that the ‘black body’ is a commodity to be damaged. Instead, it should be
internalized that everyone in our world should be treated with equality and
respect – regardless of his/her outer appearance or ethnic background – so that
each human could live comfortably in our world without being afflicted by any
kind of fears.
By Nele R.
Aaron's Edit:
In the text “A Letter to my Son(”,) [St - ^,”] the African-American author Ta-Nehisi Coates writes about the issue of racism and (the life) [foc,E - the hardship endemic to the lives] of African-Americans. In a letter dedicated to his son [P - ^,] which was published in July 2015 in The Atlantic, Coates presents his experiences as (being) [E] a person with a (‘black body’) [St - ^“black body”] living in America, describes the cruelty that black people encounter throughout their lifetime, and tries to raise his son’s awareness of the hatred with which African-Americans (were/are) [T/Asp - ^have been and continue to be] confronted.
In particular, Coates speaks in his letter about the fear that “ruled everything around me, and I knew, as all black people do, that this fear was connected to the world out there(”.) [St - ^.”] Above all, violence, criminality, and humiliation stoked this fear. Since many people misleadingly thought [P,Gr - ^,] and probably still think[P,Gr - ^,] that people (having) [W,Gr - ^with] black skin are inferior to (‘white people’,) [St - ^“white people,”] African-Americans were oppressed in American society and were even treated as slaves for a long time(, as) [Gr-sentence fragment - ^. As] Coates states: “We were black, beyond the visible spectrum, beyond civilization. Our history was inferior because we were inferior, which is to say our bodies were inferior. And our inferior bodies could not possibly be accorded to the same respect as those that built the West.”
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